It’s amazing what people spot, just showed this to my mate and he spotted something wrong that no-one else has noticed yet which is highlighted in bold.
RIGHT all comments acknowledged and amendments made, here is the final statement lol...
Having graduated from Sheffield Hallam University with a first class degree, receiving third prize in the 2008 CIAT Student Awards for Technical Excellence was, for me, the crowning achievement of my studies. Following a demanding four year course, this award justifies all the hard work that not only I, but my lecturers have undertaken. I feel privileged that my efforts have been recognised and will be honoured to receive my award in London.