Reword this please

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Hi guys,


This is your moment and every single minute you spend try to hold onto it cause you may never get it again.



Could somebody reword this please as it doesn't seem to fit properly? Or is it just me ?

Thanks
 
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Hi guys,


This is your moment and every single minute you spend try to hold onto it cause you may never get it again.



Could somebody reword this please as it doesn't seem to fit properly? Or is it just me ?

Thanks


This is your time, hold onto every single second, because it may never come again.

Or you could just say One Life...Live it.
 
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