follow a simple 'timeline' or chain of events. Eliminate the cause - the clock - and the story never exists in the first place. The school and police don't get the chance to overreact etc etc.
But yes I do get your point. I was simply pointing out that whether we like it or not the clock/box of wires is central to the story. Though I do appreciate, what happened afterwards is of more interest to most.
If the kid wasn't born you don't have a story.
Saying the cause was the kid bringing his device into school is amost as irrelevant, just less proximate. He has done nothing wrong and should be confident in doing the same thing again.
It's akin to some people assigning the cause of a sexual assault being the innocent actions of the victim or other such pointless and irrelevant statements. The focus should always be on the people that have actually done something wrong.
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