Covering letter for supervisor role at work

One thing I would say is maybe drop the "I think" in favour of something a bit more positive, you obviously don't want to sound too far up your own *** either so just try to get a good balance. Maybe something along the lines of..

"I believe that I would be the ideal candidate for the role because..."

That's the thing that jumped out at me anyway :)
 
In the 2 months since I joined the Online Shopping department I have learnt a lot and can recognise what makes a good shopping experience for the customer.
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"In the 2 months I have spent working at the online shopping department I have developed many skills such as .... and this allows me to appreciate the need for .... to provide a positive shopping experience for the customers."

Basically it is alright, but your wording can make it much better.
 
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