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[MattTheTall77]

+1

Was going to say but couldn't be bothered with the gay comments, they need to come off the whole site imo, just no need.

well it was the woman on the monitor that made me buy my last one

 

[Narziss]

It's definitely.. busy. I think whoever gave you the copy/spec for that should be e-shot.

That's way too much information for 1 newsletter. I don't really want to comment harshly on the design as it's your first one and you've obviously had to squeeze too much in.

Less info would give a cleaner, more appealing and easy to read newsletter. Sign-up for Apples newsletters/product updates and borrow ideas. They have the best marketing.

I agree with the comments made here, especially with "I think whoever gave you the copy/spec for that should be e-shot".

I also don't want to comment harshly, so I will simply go with a 5/10.

 

[gord]

+1

Was going to say but couldn't be bothered with the gay comments, they need to come off the whole site imo, just no need.

Those women will have sold more monitors than you can imagine. There are some marketing adages that don't die for a reason, and "sex sells" is one of them.