HELP! ME! (VALENTIME POEM) PLZZZZ

The moonlight shines upon you,
Making you stand out so true.

Nothing but a goddess,
People envy all about you.

Radiant beauty flows right through,
To your heart, head and soul.

We know who you really are,
Someone who cares, cares by far;
Who loves to be loved,
And loves to be hugged.

The person I know,
Is the person I fell for,
The person I dream about,
This person, I need, need more.

Take the friendship while it lasts,
Make a future and remember the past,
It won’t last forever,
But nothing ever does,
so we take the friendship and turn it into love.

I have to leave now as time is getting short,
Don’t worry though, you’re in my every thought.
I’m sure I’ll see you again soon,
I’ll see radiant beauty and light from the moon,
Just remember these words,
As I remember yours,
And we’ll be fine, forever more.

BOOM. The lady's love it. Wrote it last year, change it around a bit, or use it as an example, and you're the man!
 
The moonlight shines upon you,
Making you stand out so true.

Nothing but a goddess,
People envy all about you.

Radiant beauty flows right through,
To your heart, head and soul.

We know who you really are,
Someone who cares, cares by far;
Who loves to be loved,
And loves to be hugged.

The person I know,
Is the person I fell for,
The person I dream about,
This person, I need, need more.

Take the friendship while it lasts,
Make a future and remember the past,
It won’t last forever,
But nothing ever does,
so we take the friendship and turn it into love.

I have to leave now as time is getting short,
Don’t worry though, you’re in my every thought.
I’m sure I’ll see you again soon,
I’ll see radiant beauty and light from the moon,
Just remember these words,
As I remember yours,
And we’ll be fine, forever more.

BOOM. The lady's love it. Wrote it last year, change it around a bit, or use it as an example, and you're the man!


think he means use it and you'll be a man's man lol :p

i asked to end the dribble but i think that was a little OTT
 
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