I'll annoy you with this one. CV critique please?

Good heavens, it seems my poor CV is being torn to shreds!

Thanks for your comments so far everyone. I'll take your criticisms on board. In the meantime, I note my general lack of work experience has been a common point of concern. On that note, do you believe adding either of these to my CV would help:

1. I've been playing Counter Strike since v1.3; I used to play under the name HotmaiL but I now prefer Ph3N

2. I have recorded and made available on the Internet some most excellent video productions

Do you think either of these would impress prospective employers? All comments appreciated :)

I can't see how that would improve it.

What kind of jobs are you applying for specifically?

The whole thing is far far too informal, as someone has mentioned it reads more like a dating advert.

I never was a big fan of uni careers services, but tbh you are so far off the mark here I think that would be a good place to start.
 
I can't see how that would improve it.

What kind of jobs are you applying for specifically?

The whole thing is far far too informal, as someone has mentioned it reads more like a dating advert.

I never was a big fan of uni careers services, but tbh you are so far off the mark here I think that would be a good place to start.

Read the whole thread next time :D
 
Those that have read the thread.

Go back and read it now, knowing who it is about. Genuine lols! :D


[TW]Fox;18555775 said:
What a shame ProOrWhat was banned - its always more amusing to see people try to defend themselves.

He could always use his second account. :)
 
Does come across as a bit obsessive since you already mentioned him in the OP :/
 
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