

benneh said:I've got to say, the concept of constructive criticism is really lost on the OcUK photog forum. I personally think that these images are pretty bad, and saying 'Great' and 'cool!' really isn't helping anyone to progress.
The first and last images are overexposed (the last especially), the sky is totally bleached out and any definition in the trees is completely shot. The spiders-web image looks as though it's been cropped heavily or maybe you were using digital zoom. It may simply be that the camera's just terrible, but try playing with the manual mode a little (if it has one) and adjusting the shutter speed and aperture so that the camera captures less light (so that the edges of trees and so on aren't bleached out by bright light). Balance is key y0.

glitch said:Do you really, honestly think that a DSLR will answer your problems of poor composition and technique?
Maybe if you could explain what your thoughts were when taking these shots and what you struggled with when trying to capture the image you saw in your mind, people could better understand what you are trying to achieve and where you are failing.
There are a lot of good photographers on here but nobody is going to be able to help you become a better one yourself unless you can tell them, in whatever words you feel comfortable with, where you are struggling and what you want to get out of photography.
howell80 said:Last one is not very good as it appears overexposed and blurred. Have you done any post processing on this in cs2?
What camera are you using?
ChroniC said:Thats not as easy a question to answer in my opinion as you'd think, as i tried to argue not long ago.
In my opinion, you should know whats right about them by looking, photography is an art, (some people have it, others dont no matter how hard they try or what the buy) and if you can invisage it, then knowing your equipment only helps to complete the process better. Saying that il explain.
The last picture is good because the focus point draws me from the left to the mid right, it makes me feel as if im being drawn to the pathway enterance, the trees bend from a right side to a left so the picture has what is known as dynamic lining (where lines of objects cross from side to side, or converge at a point) as well as the tree tower over the low angle and make me feel quite small.
Forget about the lines and shapes for a moment, and try to think about what a photo represents, something most people never learn and is very scarce on this particular forum. Representation i think is easily as important as shapes and techniques in photography. For example, the symbology of an anorexic person outside mcdonalds, or an old person in a hospital, connotes death and illness, not just a person next to a restuarant or a person in a bed.
Your particular picture gives off i think some mystery, a whats in the woods feel, slightly sinister maybe not intentional but worthy and something you should try to include.
Ignoring the colours and quality its a good though out shot for a beginner. Well done
//edit but like i said you'll get a lot of this


I quite agree. Like I've said, today was me being bored and going out with my camera. I don't really know for myself what I like and dislike yetglitch said:You can go and read every book about compisition that has ever been written, but it's not going to make your a better photographer unless you understand for yourself what you like and dislike.

I wanted to try and get some detailed close up shots, to see if I could manage it. The woodland one was just me thinking it'd be a cool angle and wanted to see if it'd look like I wanted it to.When you were taking these three pictures, run us through what you were thinking, why you thought they'd make a good shot and what is puzzling you about the results you have shown us.
Because it's my understanding that a DSLR with lots of settings etc to fiddle with would let me experiment a bit more, and they are generally better quality cameras with decent lenses, CCDs etc aren't they?And this is a perfect example of why the recent spate of comments about being better off with a DSLR is leaving me baffled.
I didn't think you was having a pop, although your posts seem slightly aggressive for some reasonI'm not having a pop at you here, DailyGeek, I'm just wondering why you think owning a DSLR will 'get you into photography'. It's an honest question, with no malice attached, and I'd like to hear your answer.
maybe I'm just a wuss. I quite liked the spiderweb pic because it has a clear foreground/background which is probably the first and only time I've managed itThis is more like it. You were trying to get depth into the photos you've taken? How so? Did you want more of them in focus? Did you want to get a feeling of depth into the photo?

Personally, I don't think they are bad pictures? Like I said I am not even trying to compete with 99% of you guys on this board. I just took what I thought might look good. They might be technically crap to a photographer, but to me, the look at least 'ok.'In all honestly there's little good I could comment on. Do you want me to say 'Great shot!' and leave it at that, or should I be a little more critical of your efforts and try and get you to open up and discuss things a little more?