Quick opinions on this 14 second vid pls

[Sirrel Squirrel]

Hi guys, just whipped up a short 14 second video to use as an intro video on my website, I think it looks good but think it's missing something, any suggestions?

http://www.mia-media.co.uk/miatest.wmv

edit/ you can see the existing vid that this one will replace by going to my site and streaming any video other than the gta one.

 

[Sirrel Squirrel]

nice editing, but imho, that font is overused. try making a more original logo... I like the actual vid editing though, and the music works well with it too

yeh think i'll try and design a good logo, I've had that font on the website for too long now anyway I think, cheers

 

[Sirrel Squirrel]

looks gooood

nice framerates in the recording there as well. you using a raptor?

na recorded the game at 800x600 with everything on max and had fraps set to record to a different hard drive, I was quite suprised it recorded smoothly, especially as recording BF2 in the same way has awful frame rates.

Anyways glad you all think the vid looks good, think I'll try and design a cool logo to go on it instead of the text, thanks for the suggestions.