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Sorry to say but your email contains too much waffle. Whilst it probably seems comprehensive to you, I can see how reading and understanding that is going to be a chore for him. If you write a novel, don't expect the reader to have perfect levels of comprehension.
Personally, I would have listed a simple timeline of events and stated my displeasure. Then, at the end I'd have put a "please fix by x date please" deadline and made it clear that the only satisfactory options are X, Y or Z. You've included details which also don't help your case... such as you shouting down the phone at someone
What I will say, is that his reluctance to talk on the phone is also a red flag to me. I suspect he is going to want to palm you off but didn't want to admit blame on the phone. By delaying things via email he's gone away to carefully consider his answer/options.
Personally, I would have listed a simple timeline of events and stated my displeasure. Then, at the end I'd have put a "please fix by x date please" deadline and made it clear that the only satisfactory options are X, Y or Z. You've included details which also don't help your case... such as you shouting down the phone at someone
What I will say, is that his reluctance to talk on the phone is also a red flag to me. I suspect he is going to want to palm you off but didn't want to admit blame on the phone. By delaying things via email he's gone away to carefully consider his answer/options.