The haiku thread

Father Ted · 26 Apr 2012 at 14:42

Van Hellseek said:
My mistake it seems

GD not capable of

Mature threads these days

You really had to ask? (in a haiku stylee)

Rotty · 26 Apr 2012 at 14:50

lost on me

TurnipHead · 26 Apr 2012 at 14:52

Ban ban ban ban ban
Ban ban ban ban ban ban ban
Ban ban ban ban ban

Morbius · 26 Apr 2012 at 14:52

I can't think of one.
I'll just write any old tat.
I hope this will do.

J.T · 26 Apr 2012 at 15:01

In a hole I wait
You spend time looking for me
Soon we will be one

Not sure if that’s correct can it only one word per Syllables?
My first time doing one of these.

Father Ted · 26 Apr 2012 at 15:03

I stubbed my big toe
The pain was unbearable
Now the nail's come off

Guerrilla · 26 Apr 2012 at 15:03

I really don't get
the point of writing haikus
they seem pretty dumb.

Van Hellseek · 26 Apr 2012 at 15:04

J.T said:
In a hole I wait
You are looking for me
Soon we will be one

Not sure if that’s correct can it only one word per Syllables?
My first time doing one of these.

Fine except your middle line is only 6 syllables. It needs one more

Jono8 · 26 Apr 2012 at 15:07

Jump down on the floor
Wriggle your bum,shake it more.
Do the Dinosaur

J.T · 26 Apr 2012 at 15:11

Van Hellseek said:
Fine except your middle line is only 6 syllables. It needs one more

Fixed.

Spikey Willow · 26 Apr 2012 at 15:12

I don't understand
Why is everyone posting
Over just three lines?

Shayper · 26 Apr 2012 at 15:20

It's Friday, Friday
Gotta get down on Friday
Looking forward YAY

Skillmister · 26 Apr 2012 at 15:21

I am 12 years old
What is this i don't even
I'm 13 years old

J1234 · 26 Apr 2012 at 15:21

What the **** is a haiku? Is it the school holidays already?

antijoke · 26 Apr 2012 at 15:23

The Hills are alive with the sound of
Chim chimeny chim chim cheroo
A spoonful of medicine helps
Feed the birds, Tupence a bag

Banzai_Joe · 26 Apr 2012 at 15:26

Floating on a breeze
The warriors gaze is fixed
And death follows him

Arnie · 26 Apr 2012 at 15:27

Justin said:
What the **** is a haiku? Is it the school holidays already?

It's some pointless Japanese poem format using arbitrary rules that you study in GCSE English.

Van Hellseek · 26 Apr 2012 at 15:28

Banzai_Joe said:
Floating on a breeze
The warriors gaze is fixed
And death follows him

Have you per chance been

eating delicious mushrooms

that is what it seems

Craig1981 · 26 Apr 2012 at 15:39

I'm really sleepy
I want to go to my bed
And snooze for a week

Andelusion · 26 Apr 2012 at 15:40

Desktop computer
White, beige or sometimes silver
Word processing friend