History Assignment: What makes a building historically significant?

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So I have this history assignment and would like to know which building or area I should write about. Which one is historically significant and impacted that area or parts of the world. For example: I wanted to do the great wall of China
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Or Berlin wall
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My project must include

Information on the design and visuals of the building
The construction of the building
Information about the people who built the building (how they lived?)
The purpose of the building/reasons why it was constructed
The historical significance of the building
A bibliography/Webography

Which building would be best to do?

Thanks
Bakht

I AM DOING BERLIN WALL NOW :)
 
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is this good for The Berlin Wall so far?
The Berlin Wall was one of the main distractions of the 20th century because Germany was divided. There was East Germany and West Germany, East Germany was essentially communist Germany and West Germany was capitalist Germany. The Russian Armies controlled the Eastern block and the other allies controlled the Western block (England, America, France etc.) Travelling to Western Germany from Eastern Germany was allowed till 1961; although the border was closed in 1952 2.6 million people escaped Eastern Germany. The wall was built in 1961 which tried to combat travelling to western or eastern Germany.
 
Not sure if I would call it a 'distraction' unless you can back it up with proof that it was built to hide some other purpose.
 
here is the other parts I have now wrote, with some evidence

Travelling to Eastern Germany from Western Germany was despised by the Russians because Western Germans could get goods very cheaply, which is one of the reasons why the wall was constructed. The population was fuelled and many people could not keep their jobs as they worked in West Berlin, and lived in East Berlin. When the construction began there was barbed wire everywhere and people were all opposing the plans. The barbed wire entanglements and fences were placed along the 156 km around three western sectors, 43km that divided East and West Berlin.
The first concrete slab was put up on 17th August 1961 and during construction the NVA and KdA soldiers shot anyone trying to disrupt plans. An area called ‘no man’s land’ was put up so fleeing refugees were visible in a clear line of fire. The people who constructed it were normal working class West Berliners. The people who done what they were told were treated well, but the ones that tried to defect, were shot or imprisoned in the many torture chambers around the wall.
 
is this good for The Berlin Wall so far?
The Berlin Wall was one of the main distractions of the 20th century because Germany was divided. There was East Germany and West Germany, East Germany was essentially communist Germany and West Germany was capitalist Germany. The Russian Armies controlled the Eastern block and the other allies controlled the Western block (England, America, France etc.) Travelling to Western Germany from Eastern Germany was allowed till 1961; although the border was closed in 1952 2.6 million people escaped Eastern Germany. The wall was built in 1961 which tried to combat travelling to western or eastern Germany.

Few little factual errors/ambiguities here. When you say that the 'other allies controlled the Western block', you imply that they are still allies, when the Grand Alliance had been broken since 1946/7. The wall was built by the GDR (effectively East Germany) primarily to prevent the emigration of skilled labour and loss of trade to West Germany.

Be wary of using Wikipedia, if that's where you're getting your information from.
 
********, it's an assignment or coursework. Homework is done in first school.

I'm sure there are all manor of religious buildings you could write about. Maybe someone more knowledgeable might add to that...

edit: automatic stars eh?
 
Few little factual errors/ambiguities here. When you say that the 'other allies controlled the Western block', you imply that they are still allies, when the Grand Alliance had been broken since 1946/7. The wall was built by the GDR (effectively East Germany) primarily to prevent the emigration of skilled labour and loss of trade to West Germany.

Be wary of using Wikipedia, if that's where you're getting your information from.

Ok thanks
I'm not using wikipedia, my teacher tells us not to use it.
Is this ok
The Russian Armies controlled the Eastern block and the Western block was controlled by England, America, and France etc.
 
********, it's an assignment or coursework. Homework is done in first school.

I'm sure there are all manor of religious buildings you could write about. Maybe someone more knowledgeable might add to that...

edit: automatic stars eh?

also I'm in year 7, so I get homework :o
 
Ok thanks
I'm not using wikipedia, my teacher tells us not to use it.

Wikipedia isn't a bad source for preliminary research. It gives you a brief idea about the topic and much more usefully, often references proper sources so you have an idea about where to look for more information. Just remember to double check the info in wiki from the source though. Couple of times i've seen that wiki says something and references it, but the reference is actually saying something else.
 
The Berlin Wall
The Berlin Wall was one of the main distractions of the 20th century because Germany was divided. There was East Germany and West Germany, East Germany was essentially communist Germany and West Germany was capitalist Germany. The Russian Armies controlled the Eastern block and the Western block was controlled by England, America, and France etc. Travelling to Western Germany from Eastern Germany was allowed till 1961; although the border was closed in 1952 2.6 million people escaped Eastern Germany. The wall was built in 1961 which tried to combat travelling to Western or Eastern Germany.
Travelling to Eastern Germany from Western Germany was despised by the Russians because Western Germans could get goods very cheaply, which is one of the reasons why the wall was constructed. The population was fuelled and many people could not keep their jobs as they worked in West Berlin, and lived in East Berlin. When the construction began there was barbed wire everywhere and people were all opposing the plans. The barbed wire entanglements and fences were placed along the 156 km around three western sectors, 43km that divided East and West Berlin.
The first concrete slab was put up on 17th August 1961 and during construction the NVA and KdA soldiers shot anyone trying to disrupt plans. An area called ‘no man’s land’ was put up so fleeing refugees were visible in a clear line of fire. The people who constructed it were normal working class West Berliners. The people who done what they were told were treated well, but the ones that tried to defect, were shot or imprisoned in the many torture chambers around the wall. Many East Berliners were invited to the Stasi, a private intelligence agency for Eastern Germany.
People who refused to join the Stasi were tortured and most died; some of the ones who survived were sold to West Germany. People were living in fear in the Eastern Block as they could be the next victim for the Stasi organisation. The construction of the Berlin wall was shocking, there was one wire fence at 1961, and then in 1962-1965 they improved the wire. They added concrete and left it for 10 years until 1975, when they added a boundary wall until 1989. The wall was over 140km long and there was an outer and inner wall with ‘no man’s land’ in the middle. The final wall was made out of 46,000 reinforced concrete sections that were 3.6m tall and 1.2m wide. Also in strategic points the wall were made weaker so in the event of war the soviet tanks could demolish points of the wall for ease of access.
The Berlin Wall had a lot of colour on it due to graffiti and also it had many bullet holes due to people trying to escape, but they failed. The Berlin Wall is historically significant because it was the creator of new Germany, with a democracy; if it was not created and demolished then Germany still may have been divided. The world could have still been in the Cold War stage, which is why this fairly new building is very significant, which impacted the world and made the world in Europe we know today.

any grammatical or historic errors?
 
Not everyone failed in escaping. We wouldn't still be in the Cold War if the wall was still standing. Maybe a bit more about the wall coming down?

Also, how old are you? As in what school year is the for?
 
Wikipedia isn't a bad source for preliminary research. It gives you a brief idea about the topic and much more usefully, often references proper sources so you have an idea about where to look for more information. Just remember to double check the info in wiki from the source though. Couple of times i've seen that wiki says something and references it, but the reference is actually saying something else.

I'd agree with that. It's basically peer reviewed in a simple sense and likely to be far more accurate than more random pages on the internet.
 
Teachers who say you shouldn't use wiki wind me up. It gives a basic understanding of a subject and encourages you to do further research, well it does with me.

Mind you i once saw a lad print off his reference list in the library..

http://www.google.com
http://www.wikipedia.org

lol :p

The Peace Walls in Belfast/Derry are pretty interesting, read about them the other day actually :o But i see your doing the Berlin Wall, good luck :)
 
In terms of the historical significance of the Berlin wall you shouldn't really need any help. I'm not really sure what level year 7 requires so can't comment further on what you've written.
 
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