Audi S3

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Taken for a friend! Any comments, help most appreciated! :D

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Very nice product shots, to me 4 & 6 are the weakest but the rest are great. The first two are great and I think the vignetting works really well.
 
Absolutely fantastic, any chance of sharing what you did etc? I.e. Photoshop and the like.
 
They're just a touch too contrasty. You're loosing the detail in the shadows so the car has no tyres :) Also the problem with the lomo effect action is that its too uniform. The fake vingetting it produces is too symetrical. That side, the composition is good. If you could turn things down just a smidege to balance out the effect and the shadows I think you could be onto a winner.
 
cyKey said:
They're just a touch too contrasty. You're loosing the detail in the shadows so the car has no tyres :) Also the problem with the lomo effect action is that its too uniform. The fake vingetting it produces is too symetrical. That side, the composition is good. If you could turn things down just a smidege to balance out the effect and the shadows I think you could be onto a winner.
That's what I had in mind to say in my post, was a tad bit lazy in delivering the post properly though. :D
 
cyKey said:
They're just a touch too contrasty. You're loosing the detail in the shadows so the car has no tyres :) Also the problem with the lomo effect action is that its too uniform. The fake vingetting it produces is too symetrical. That side, the composition is good. If you could turn things down just a smidege to balance out the effect and the shadows I think you could be onto a winner.
Does nothing impress you ;)
 
Fstop11 said:
Does nothing impress you ;)
Some of my shots today were quite nice ;) I think you do reach a point where you see the problems with a photo quicker than the good things. I think I've trained myself to see those things so I can fix my own photos quicker. Sorry if I come off as sounding harsh :)
 
cyKey said:
Some of my shots today were quite nice ;) I think you do reach a point where you see the problems with a photo quicker than the good things. I think I've trained myself to see those things so I can fix my own photos quicker. Sorry if I come off as sounding harsh :)
nah you didnt. You just seemed like a good person to pick on :P

I must admit I have come to reliease that I do myself blow out important details unintentionally. but im too keen on on the contrast slider! or shooting into the path of the mighty sun!
 
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