Can anyone give me any constructive criticism?

[lewis2701]

Been making little edits like this for a while now, and just wondered what you lot thought of this one? Shot wise, anything I over did? Or could have done better? Or didn't do?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ql3IQgDKyeI

 

[Mint_Sauce]

The music doesn't fit too well and I can't hear you at the start. Fade the music in after you've spoken. You've got some good riding in there and the camera work would be good with some nice music on.

Off topic, which trail center is that?

Check this vid out and notice how the music fits with the pace of the action and camera changes, with the build up sections showing parts that build up to some cool jump or something.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedded&v=RmQ3lfT_JAs