Can someone look over my CV please

Smokes · 9 Mar 2006 at 18:52

I've just re done my CV with a view to adding it on some job websites and just wondered if you peeps would have a look over it and tell me where I've gone wrong

Any input is gratefully received

http://www.smokes.dsl.pipex.com/cv.pdf

EDIT: Version 2 here http://www.smokes.dsl.pipex.com/cv2.pdf as of 10/03/06 19:45pm

Go on, rip it apart!!

Smokes · 9 Mar 2006 at 19:13

Excellent, thanks for looking at it

/runs off to make changes

Also I was wondering if I should be putting in more specific areas of knowledge? i.e. I've virtually single handedly setup 10 sbs 2003 networks so know my way around 2003 server and exchange 2003 pretty well along with setting up a primary school of 100+ users, using group policies e.t.c. i just don't have the bit of microsoft paper with my name on it due to funds

EDIT: the colour was the missus being fancy with it

Take it out you reckon?

Smokes · 10 Mar 2006 at 14:09

You guys are top! I'm in the process of re hashing it so I'll put an updated one up later on for you to tear apart again

Smokes · 10 Mar 2006 at 19:45

Ok have had a quick play around and come up with another, although i don't think some of my working is right. Pick away again please

I've updated the first post with the link too.

http://www.smokes.dsl.pipex.com/cv2.pdf

By the way, I think its the pdf program thats making it a bit wonky but I'm just using it for the time being while I'm trying to sort it out