Can someone proofread my cv please

DJMK4 · 8 Apr 2006 at 00:07

I know i have asked before but i have made some final tweaks (I hope).

http://www.caldicot-pc-helpdesk.co.uk/cv.pdf

Would appritiate some constructive feedback so i can save it as a final finished file

DJMK4 · 8 Apr 2006 at 00:12

basmic said:
You're wasting far too much space, with those gray boxes. Not to mention they look ugly, and disrupt the flow of the CV itself.

What about if they were made smaller? i want to break the sections of the cv up by using some sort of visual aid.

DJMK4 · 8 Apr 2006 at 00:13

DaveyD said:
I personally like having a personal statement at the beginning of the CV.

Take away the (4 Years) part on your driving licence. Most will care that you've got a licence, and it'll be out of date next year.

Summery should be 'Summary', though that could go at the top, below your personal details, and worded a little bit more general info about yourself maybe.

What sort of things would you include in your personal statement?

DJMK4 · 8 Apr 2006 at 00:24

updated version

http://www.caldicot-pc-helpdesk.co.uk/cv.pdf

DJMK4 · 8 Apr 2006 at 00:26

Ill get a personal statement in there tomorrow and add it before the skills,

is it ok in that flow?

Personal Statement
Skills
Education
Employment
Hobbies & Interests
Summary
Refs

??

BTW the months are included in the employment :confused:

DJMK4 · 8 Apr 2006 at 00:32

I guess the order and flow goes on your opinions, not everyone's is going to be the same is it???

Think aslong as i generally got everything in the correct place i should be fine. Otherwise i could be tweaking it for days! going to give it one more blast through tomorrow and add the personal statement, maybe add some more bits and bobs and ill render it complete.

DJMK4 · 8 Apr 2006 at 00:36

Ekim said:
Just found another.

'Knowledgeable of computer systems'

that doesn't sound right.

About?

"Knowledgable about computer systems"

or

"Knowledge in computer systems"