had a download and heres what i think
first, from your perspective. the Cinematography was quite good. Liked the panning as the action unfolded. The zooming in on the long range kills did nothing for me however
i did like the bit at the start, with the music from the caffreys music. The slight pattern over the screen, the 3rd person perspective, and the way the camera panned to the action was very good.
it just exposed CS 1.6s blocky textures and most of the time, they were spraying, and the zooming in just exposed that the multiple kill came from luck, as the bullets landed randomly in a group around them
choice of music was good. Very appropriate, not a single song i didnt like
also, you used one clip twice. Twas a multiple kill on train, near the T spawn with a USP by nfraid ? couldnt quite see the name, as again it was zoomed in.
some good pistol head shots, but a lot of the rifle action was spraying. Letting off more than 2/3 bullets at a time. which is just plain luck and not really worth showcasing.
but thats a matter of oppinion
but otherwise good cinematography