CV critique (any feedback appreciated)

[kai]

Hi,

Graduating university I walked straight into my current job role (8 years ago).

I have never really sat down and put a CV together until now (this might reflect, in my post). Edrof guide on the front page has been a solid reference.

Would the people of OcuK mind doing a quick critique, ANY feedback would be appreciated.

I have removed any personal information. (Please ignore the format on the second page, it is the same font and alignment on the page)

Cover letter:

 

[kai]

Thank you everyone for the feedback, I have taken this all on board and thought I need to do as advised in terms of bullet points for each role.

First draft of evidence.

The job market is competitive and I need to make sure my CV stands out. I am considering having my CV written (or simply reviewed) by a qualified professional, ensuring it is optimised for keywords etc. Maybe the layout needs some work as well.

Has anyone used such a service?