CV Help Pls

[Fantom]

Hi Ive just written my first CV and have kind of muddled through and wondered if any of you guys could cast your eyes over it for me

thanks (any advice appreciated)

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[Fantom]

thanks good call

 

[Fantom]

thanks MrLOL ill make some changes

thanks for the advice

trouble is i dont have much experience but ill try to bulk it out a bit more

 

[Fantom]

Try to avoid sentances and use bullet points. You have not specified what grade you got on your diploma.

No one cares which particular grade you achieved during your GCSEs. 10 GCSEs at (A - C) including Maths and English is a good exam.

i havent included the results for the diploma because i havent finished it yet
but will do very soon and hoping for a distinction

good point about the GCSEs it could give me something to talk about in the interview

also if i summarise the GCSEs what do i do about my GNVQ, put in the equivelent?

 

[Fantom]

A general pointer: get rid of the grocers apostrophe and write all numbers in spelling where possible.

i.e. 4 B's should be: four Bs

consider it done

thanks