Soldato
On the last set...
Some are pretty good as candid's, but I wouldn't class any of them as 'fashion' shots personally.
Below is what I would call 'fashion' shot's.
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1) Very nice candid
2) Nice candid, I like how the natural light is giving a nice rim light, however the distracting green car reinforces the 'candid feel' of the image.
3) Would be really nice if the subject was wearing a different outfit. Subject could do with more separation from the background via lighting or DOF. Also crop is too close to feet. You may wish to consider a close crop above the knee.
4) Kinda looks closer to Voyeurism than fashion!
5) This one's not a keeper...
I had a look at your blog, and some shots on there are very impressive (I remember seeing a couple posted on POTN), but IMO you need to begin learning how to light a subject in order pull off 'fashion' shot's instead of candid's.
You also need to work at which backgrounds you place the subject in front of, You don't need nice backgrounds per se, but you need know how to make them look good.
Look around for some interesting colours or shapes that would look nicely abstract with a shallow DOF.
Some are pretty good as candid's, but I wouldn't class any of them as 'fashion' shots personally.
Below is what I would call 'fashion' shot's.
DVD Link
1) Very nice candid
2) Nice candid, I like how the natural light is giving a nice rim light, however the distracting green car reinforces the 'candid feel' of the image.
3) Would be really nice if the subject was wearing a different outfit. Subject could do with more separation from the background via lighting or DOF. Also crop is too close to feet. You may wish to consider a close crop above the knee.
4) Kinda looks closer to Voyeurism than fashion!
5) This one's not a keeper...
I had a look at your blog, and some shots on there are very impressive (I remember seeing a couple posted on POTN), but IMO you need to begin learning how to light a subject in order pull off 'fashion' shot's instead of candid's.
You also need to work at which backgrounds you place the subject in front of, You don't need nice backgrounds per se, but you need know how to make them look good.
Look around for some interesting colours or shapes that would look nicely abstract with a shallow DOF.



I know what you mean about the cigarette and the ladder, as much as a good excuse that is for having them there in the first place. I did think about Photoshopping out the ladder when I first saw it, but decided just to leave it to make it feel a bit more like a photo rather than more of a studio set piece. I'm off out now, but thanks again for taking the time to post!