Feedback on my ad?

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Put my z4 up for sale today, wondering if my ad looks alright or needs updating.

any feedback welcome, really cba messing with people and getting silly questions. I believe I covered what needs to be covered in an ad but you never know.

http://www.ebay.co.uk/itm/173148242108

thanks
 
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maybe
- how many mm left on tyres (vs Presentable condition.)
- which work was done during your ownership (who by)#
- picture of head unit ?

# edit - being clear - pre-empts the selling on before bills thought
 
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Why did u put it on “Buy it now” instead of classified :confused: you get idiots clicking buy it now who have no intention of turning up or if they give u a deposit PayPal and eBay will take there cut meaning less money for u.
I always use classified on there 28 days for £15 and just put “cash on collection” with my mobile number for buyers to arrange a viewing.
Surely a car like this is also worth putting on Pistonheads?
 
jpaul said:
maybe
- how many mm left on tyres (vs Presentable condition.)
- which work was done during your ownership (who by)#
- picture of head unit ?

# edit - being clear - pre-empts the selling on before bills thought
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Presentable condition was for the alloys not the tyres, added a note RE tyres. thanks

Dav4 said:
Why did u put it on “Buy it now” instead of classified :confused: you get idiots clicking buy it now who have no intention of turning up or if they give u a deposit PayPal and eBay will take there cut meaning less money for u.
I always use classified on there 28 days for £15 and just put “cash on collection” with my mobile number for buyers to arrange a viewing.
Surely a car like this is also worth putting on Pistonheads?
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good point, derped around on the phone when creating it hence the buy it now, sorted now.

thanks
 
Dav4 said:
Surely a car like this is also worth putting on Pistonheads?
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pistonheads is interesting, I had it on there before and has 3 messages, two of which were from dealers, wanting to sell it for me and take a cut.
 
I'd also list on Facebook marketplace, car&classic and gumtree - all are free so nothing to lose by doing so and any extra traffic is good
 
It's a good ad which covers all the bases but can be improved.

Pics could be better but they clearly show the car. If the wheels are nearly perfect I'd include a pic of each.

I'd be crystal clear about exactly what is for sale. Include the aftermarket head unit in the price and add a pic, as mentioned. If it's not included sell it separately.

Also what is the "sportier" exhaust? State that it's a Racing Beat 123 or whatever.

Good luck with the sale it's a lovely car.
 
Quality of pictures ( focus ) is good, but you've taken them on a dull day and in semi shadow, get the car out in the open and full sun, location is ok and of no importance anyway, because you only stare at the car looking for faults....
compared to the many cars i look at online (mostly yank musclecars) these photos are quite good.
what might help ? photos of the underside and a couple more of the engine bay
 
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