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Looks good for a pano print, was it a sunset? I'd probably have brought out some more detail on the ground along the bottom though.
 
I don't mind the composition (and this may be my crappy work monitor) but the land really does need the detail brought back and possibly the same for the darker portions of cloud.
 
The second to right frame and the left frame are underexposed and you need to correct that before stitching them

Are you sure about that? Looking at the areas you've mentioned the coincide with the darker clouds above so it seems right that the reflections are darker also.
 
It looks to me like the clouds are darker because it's underexposed, I may be wrong but it's an unfortunate composition or b/w conversion if that's genuinely in the file.
 
My minds eye keeps thinking you've chopped something off to the left. As it's starting to curve back in it gets cut short so unbalances the shot for me.
 
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