First University Assignment Due In Thursday

[jcb33]

Hi All, just getting nervouse, never done a Uni assignment before, and im not sure if what im doing will be up to scratch, this Assignment involves taking digital images, photoshoping them so that they look better/different/etc, and then documenting what you have done, what you think etc.

Right now I am working on my images, I have done 2 of 4, and I realy need opinions, on whether you think they will be up to scratch, if you think there are any improvements I can make etc.

Picture 1:

Origional:

http://jcb33.co.uk/host/OcUK/Uni Work/PIC_0378.JPG

Photoshop:

http://jcb33.co.uk/host/OcUK/Uni Work/Phone Boothe.jpg

Picture 2:

Origional:

http://jcb33.co.uk/host/OcUK/Uni Work/PIC_0043.JPG

Photoshop 1:

http://jcb33.co.uk/host/OcUK/Uni Work/PIC_00612.jpg

Photoshop 2:

http://jcb33.co.uk/host/OcUK/Uni Work/PIC_0061qqqq.jpg

Picture 3:

Origional:

http://jcb33.co.uk/host/OcUK/Uni Work/PIC_0183.JPG

Photoshop 1:

http://jcb33.co.uk/host/OcUK/Uni Work/Lincoln City.jpg

Photoshop 2:

http://jcb33.co.uk/host/OcUK/Uni Work/Lincoln City 2 copy.jpg

Picture 4:

Origional:
http://jcb33.co.uk/host/OcUK/Uni Work/PIC_0264.JPG

Photoshop 1:

http://jcb33.co.uk/host/OcUK/Uni Work/Louth Spire Afar.jpg

Photoshop 2:

http://jcb33.co.uk/host/OcUK/Uni Work/Louth Spire Afar copy2.jpg

Photoshop 3:

http://jcb33.co.uk/host/OcUK/Uni Work/Louth Spire Afa roarr.jpg

I Am also wondering, how much detail do you need to go into, E.G For A-level I could write 200 pages about one thing... but I cant see him reading 200 pages from every student

Thanks for your help, Jason!

 

[jcb33]

Blimey. Your first 1! This my first year and i put 2 in already and i got 2 to do before end of year.

Well Technicaly according to the university its my third, However I dont count the exams I had as Assignments

 

[jcb33]

What the hell is your course? sounds a piece of ****!

lmao, I would edit out the sweary btw Its Games Computing, The first year is made up of 2 semesters each having 5 units:

Intro To Programing/Further Programing
Systems/Operating Systems
Creative Technologies (The one this is for)
Intro To Games Studies
Data/Networks/The Web

 

[jcb33]

Don't worry, it'll get a lot harder, I did the course last year.

I should probably take a couple of photos for this aswell...

You on the same course, E.G Games Computing Year 1 at Lincoln then ?

 

[jcb33]

Ask the head of course?

Oh, and it's spelt original

I thought it looked wrong Dam my spelling

 

[jcb33]

The telephone box one isn't too great. Really you want the "TELEPHONE" text to stand out a bit more. It looks washed out because of the brightness of the white background it's on. I take it that one is a work in progress though.

The second photoshop for the second pic is the best I think. It makes it look like it was taken on a sunny day with much better looking colours.

For the fourth pic, the first photo shop looks too red. It looks like it's taken on a summer evening but the colour of the sky doesn't agree with that. The second one looks a little better but it still seems a bit odd to me.

I'm doing an optional unit at the moment which covers the basics of image manipulation, but considering I've only had one lecture on it, I'd take what I say with a pinch of salt.

Aye, I agree with you on Picture 4, Been messing around with it, but I cant seem to get the color just right... Still I will keep playing and see what I end up with

 

[jcb33]

Computer Games Production Year 1 now, but yea, i'm at Lincoln.

In fact, i'm about to go to a workshop now, all be it a few minutes late.

yay if it was the creative tech one I was there, bugging the guys for help, and saying yo to dan