27 Jul 2011 at 18:48 #21 Skidder Skidder Man of Honour Joined 28 Nov 2007 Posts 12,749 Both options have too many words and are clumsy.
27 Jul 2011 at 18:53 #22 Morgoth Morgoth Soldato Joined 1 Dec 2003 Posts 5,128 Location West Lothian, Scotland Microsoft Word would be going to town with green underlining on those.
27 Jul 2011 at 19:26 #23 Rich_L Rich_L Soldato Joined 18 Oct 2002 Posts 18,175 Location Santa Barbara, Californee Yeah both examples read horribly, words like omitted were created for this very purpose - use them!
27 Jul 2011 at 19:27 #24 Squark Squark Soldato Joined 11 Apr 2004 Posts 11,550 Location In Christ Neither.
27 Jul 2011 at 19:27 #25 Freefaller Freefaller Man of Honour Joined 5 Jun 2003 Posts 91,808 Location Falling... Rich_L said: Yeah both examples read horribly, words like omitted were created for this very purpose - use them! Click to expand... Indeed.
Rich_L said: Yeah both examples read horribly, words like omitted were created for this very purpose - use them! Click to expand... Indeed.
