How's this?

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So i went into college today and told if i make a room on maya i can boost my marks on my assesment to a distinction, So i spent most of the night doing this

2-3 hours making it and then it took 40 minutes to render it with 256 Samples per pixel, I know the pillow went goofy because I lost the texture I used for it, Taking into account that I have only used this program for just over a month and a half how do you think I did?, I'm hoping to get into this as a job when once I finish college and uni

 

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That's your bedroom ain't it?

I was going to do my room but its not that great, I did this from the top of my head, Its what I would want my room to look like , I did take some of my room into it though well just a wardrobe that isnt really visible in that render

 

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Is that a door without a knob?

Um...Thanks for noticing that, Must have looked at that 1000 times without realising

 

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What's showing on the TV?

I love the show "Bones"

The most important thing for you to work on is scales and perspectives.

Most of the stuff you have made appears to be skewed in either width or height.

It looks like you have the basics of using the tools down, now you just need to focus on making sure everything is to the correct scale.

The door for example looks WAY too big, the fireplace looks too short in height, the shelf above it is very low, as does the wardrobe off to the right.

There isn't any skirting board either, which throws the image off and makes the floor look a bit flat due to how it adjusts the perspective.

Thanks! I've got a lot to learn still! I noticed with some of my Perspectives that for example i did a wardrobe it looked a bit too big so i made sure to tone that down, Is there any tips you have to ensure the scale's are right?

 

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Did you miss the hearth too?

Never thought to put one in , I didn't know what that was before i searched it up :3