IT Admin CV Critique

RoboCod

RoboCod

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Friend of mine has asked me to look at her CV, for some reason she thinks I'm good at these :confused:

I haven't had time to have a really good look over it yet and will in detail tonight. After a quick cursory glance I picked up on the overuse of the words "numerous" and "various", I don't like these ambiguous meanings and would delete them out. The About Me section is weak and could be written better and the education should be chronologically ordered from most recent and down.

Anything else and any critique would be much appreciated! I'm sure there are many better CV writers here than I and she is applying for another IT role, something I know very little about.

Thanks for your help, it will save me a lot of time tonight so it is much appreciated

http://www.mediafire.com/?l63b3735tej9s3h
 
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What, you mean neither of you don't have a crapbox email for signing up to stuff you know will attract spam, i.e. exactly this sort of thing? How odd.
 
Ok, I've started to change it as per some advice here (thank you very much). Look familiar?! :p Hope you don't mind - not like she will be competing with you eh!?
 
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gambitt said:
I've made some more annotations:
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Thanks very much for this. Regards the IT systems; I don't have a clue myself about that area so I will have to chat with her about what you mentioned and how she can bulk out better with what she actually does, only she knows.

Engram said:
Her full name is still embedded in there though.
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Call me daft, but I can't see where :confused:
 
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