ChroniC said:The first is excellent, it very hard to get a perfect black and a well lit subject, is there any photoshop work done to tidy that?The second is good but i feel for me a little overexposed.
Good effort though, care to share your set up?
Both you and your main light need to be lower. What focal length are you using? I think you might need a slightly longer lens for this particular person.
What is the purpose of these pics? I don't want to make any more specific comments until you answer this.
Strax said:The first one was shot at 35mm, which is a bit wide. The camera was placed up with Lisa looking up. On reflection now, a small set of steps might have been the better option. The second was shot at 60mm. Can you explain why both the main light and myself needs to be lower? THis is all new to me so any pointers are good feedback![]()
Any specific reason why you wanted to know the purpose? The shots are only for fun and some practice for me![]()
On the second pic, you are getting stray light on her cheek that is not facing your main light (around the chin). I don't know if this was intended, but it is not something I would do. I guess it is personal preference. If it was not intended, then either move your light further towards the backdrop, or move the model forwards. The lighting is pretty flat in the second pic (Something I am also very guilty of sometimes). You can separate her from the background using a hair light or rim lighting.
Strax said:How would you improve the lighting in the second picture? I only have 2 strobes, so a hair light isn't possible if I need to light the backdrop to brighten it?