More birds from me!! 56k no!

Soldato
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Popped over Hanningfield Reservoir again today and got some more shots.
I was really back there looking for that Robin but he was not about!

All comments and critique most welcome.



Any ideas what the first bird is??

1
dunno.jpg


2
dunno1.jpg


3
goose4.jpg


4
goose5.jpg


5
robin4.jpg
 
SDK^ said:
Shots 1,3 and 4 look flat, the foreground birds don't 'pop' out from the background.
It's a shame the Robin is a touch underexposed but it's something that can be fixed - Just be careful you don't go too far and make it look plastic.
Shot 7 would look better had the shadow of the bird not been cut off at the bottom.

I know how hard birds are to photograph in flight so you’ve done well.

Thanks for the comments SDK...

How would you make the first 4 stand out more? I have tweaked the levels and run a noise program on them. Do yo uthink the noiseware app has softened them too much? I used noise ninja

I was not going to post the robin shot but as its pretty sharp I wanted to try and turn it in to a silhouette but was unsure of the best way to do this

I noticed the shadow when I cropped the shot but its hard enough to get the bird in the frame let alone the shadow!

It was a lot harder than I thought. it seemed a lot harder than panning for motorsport shots (just a little slower!!)

Thanks for the comments guys... It means a lot to hear I'm improving

Orange Peel said:
Excellent pics IMHO. I can't offer any C&C as I'm not educated enough to give any.

What lense were they taken with?

All shots taken with my 70-300IS

Colin_da_Killer said:
#9 is great! Diffenately the best.

P.S I want to steal your cat.

Sorry but the cat stays.... :D :D

Just after than shot she pounced on me!!

Thanks again for the comments guys
 
cyKey said:
I hope you don't mind but I had a quick play with one of the shots. While they're nice and sharp shots, I'm guessing it was overcast that day leaving flat tones and colours.



What I did was this.

1. New Adjustment Layer, Levels, click OK
2. Left slider to the end of the histogram, right to the beginning of it
3. Selected background layer.
4. Dodge tool set to highlights 14%. Just ran it over the shadowed areas to bring them out a touch.
5. Cropped to focus more on the bird and remove the empty space that didn't feel like it added to the shot.

Thanks for that Cykey. It does look a lot better :D
Yep was manky and dull. Its has been like that the 3 times I've been over there.
Roll on the spring/summer!
 
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