It's alright I s'pose. Not my sort of thing really. I don't know whether its the production or not, but it just sounds a bit limp. No punch :/
carzy you listen to crazy stuff! so probably not the track is very commercial. kinda like a mcfly kinda sound.
You want to sound like Mcfly?![]()
GRINDCORE JA?
Bit cheesey but I like it. Think there's a little too much bass in the intro - seems to be attacked rather than gently struck which I feel would be more appropriate in this case.
The rest of the song is pretty damn good though - think you could make more of an ending also, seems to just...finish. Then play with effects![]()