Nature attempt 2

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After my first attempt at shooting the green stuff, which wasn't exactly fantastic, I've tried to take some of the C&C on board and take a bit more time trying to compose the shot and less time in LR :p

Was also a first test of my new camera a Fujifilm X-T1 with 23mm f/1.4R

Let me know what you think and for those that gave C&C before if I'm, hopefully, stumbling in the right direction? :confused:

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1 & 6 I like, 8 could have worked if composed a bit better. :)

The others don't do much for me I'm afraid, at f/1.4 you could have got some real lovely bokeh in these which would have worked well.
 
No 1 is by far the strongest and could be improved further by applying some differing styles in post, none of the others really offer anything to me personally.

On the plus side you've got the exposures spot on and the processing is fine, what you need to think about and composition and subject. Take a shot, then take it again on your knees or even lower if you can as its amazing how this can sometimes change a shot from a nothing photo to suddenly interesting.

Think about the focal point, if you want something specific to stand out use a wide aperture and try to get as a close as you can while still retaining what you want in the frame.
 
Best times for 'woodwork' are first thing in the morning or in the evening when the sun's low in the sky; then you stand a half-decent chance of interesting lighting. The rest of the day they're tough subjects to make interesting to a viewer.

Columbo's thoughts are all good though.
 
Agree with Andrew and will add that forestry seems like a great place to take photos but it can be very hard. Good light will help tremendously for atmosphere so really it's up early or out around golden hour to get some nice light on things.
 
Nicely exposed and no garish colours so that's a start :)

Would agree with the above comments, the lights very flat, you can get some amazing shots first thing in the morning or late in the evening.

Looks a very capable camera and lens.
 
Well I think they are very pleasing, and have a nice atmosphere, but I love woodlands... yes morning or evening would give some potentially nicer lighting.

I would not be put off by 'they're just trees' type comments, that offer nothing but negativity... you can say the same of any type of subject.
 
Cheers all, I was more going on a hike around Burnham Beeches and taking the camera along with me to get familiar with it in a trial by fire rather then the sole purpose of the trip.

The light was indeed harsh and woodland is one of the things I'm most uncomfortable shooting, composing or really have much of an idea on what to do, but I guess you don't really develop unless you dive in at the deep end so to speak.

Composition was the main aim of any photos I took, Instead of just walking and snapping like I usually do and sorting through the **** I stopped and spent a couple of minutes thinking about exposure, settings, distance, angle and where to put the subject (I only really know the composition rules of 3rds, leading lines and that diagonal lines are good, although that's most likely quite clear from the shots) I found I had a lot less shots at the end of the day but much better quality ones.

1 & 6 I like, 8 could have worked if composed a bit better. :)

The others don't do much for me I'm afraid, at f/1.4 you could have got some real lovely bokeh in these which would have worked well.

I definitely agree with 8, it was a fork of two paths going around that tree but dead centre which would have been the preferred position was deep soggy mud, I was in walking boots and shorts and didn't have my gaiters on me so it wasn't going to happen as much as I'd have liked the shot :p I might pop back when I'm down that way again and try and re-compose the same shot.

5 was a bokeh attempt but I'm still getting used to an APS-C sensor again coming from a FF where I found it much easier to control it, I've since done another shoot and got the hang of controlling it will post up the pics later.

No 1 is by far the strongest and could be improved further by applying some differing styles in post, none of the others really offer anything to me personally.

On the plus side you've got the exposures spot on and the processing is fine, what you need to think about and composition and subject. Take a shot, then take it again on your knees or even lower if you can as its amazing how this can sometimes change a shot from a nothing photo to suddenly interesting.

Think about the focal point, if you want something specific to stand out use a wide aperture and try to get as a close as you can while still retaining what you want in the frame.

I'm trying to just do the minimal in post at the moment until I'm much better at composition, out of interest how would you process 1 differently?

I'll try the height thing when I take my camera out to play again :)
 
Since you explained you took time to look at your subjects and compose them I went back over all of them and viewed them differently. If I'm honest I just scrolled down past before as I've seen so many woodland photos that are just pictures of woodland :P

I can now see where you've put the time and effort with placing your subjects and the lines you've created with parrallax, rule of 3 and rule of thirds etc but they're not massively obvious.

I'd say the next step is still lighting to help those lines and compositions really pop. Also, could try playing around with the height the camera and don't be afraid to tilt the camera if you're going for more abstract lines since the subject at that point isn't the object itself but the lines and shapes they create so there is no up or down etc.

Depends what direction you want to go.
 
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I don't agree with the notion that the light is less than ideal. You've got lovely diffuse light there to work with and plenty of it.

My advice would be look up, look down, and look closer. The canopy overhead, the leaves on the ground, the moss on the trees. Think textures, colours, and contrasts.
 
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