Remove the emboss!
Keep it simple when using lettering. Typography only needs a simple style to look good, use the background and images to do the fancy stuff.
Maybe centralise the fonts and work with some gradients on the background, bring a image into if you want.
Drop the stroke to 2px, too thick and you lose your work area.
Not bad, That design looks familar tho.....
Where have i seen that design before..
Familiar looking sig