30 Jul 2007 at 14:39 #1 StaticThought StaticThought Associate Joined 5 Jul 2007 Posts 23 This is Charlene.. Thanks for looking
30 Jul 2007 at 14:52 #2 Simonnn Simonnn Associate Joined 16 Jul 2006 Posts 463 Location Birmingham/oxford Looks quite flat to me, not sure on the crop too, if it has been cropped?
30 Jul 2007 at 15:27 #3 StaticThought StaticThought Associate OP Joined 5 Jul 2007 Posts 23 No Crop, Just how I framed it.
30 Jul 2007 at 18:13 #4 Nicos Rex Nicos Rex Associate Joined 20 Apr 2007 Posts 348 Location Hertfordshire Pretty girl. The hair over the eye is very distracting. For black & white there needs to be a bit more contrast - especially in the lippy. Nice catchlights in the eyes. Would prefer to see just a bit of chin - her face looks alarmingly incomplete without it. The lighting is pretty good overall - maybe just a tad more shadow would give it more definition. I think that it is just a little too much of a close-up to be flattering to her skin and that shine doesn't help. Shots like this are very demanding both for photographer and "stylist" - this falls just a little bit short on both counts - but a creditable effort.
Pretty girl. The hair over the eye is very distracting. For black & white there needs to be a bit more contrast - especially in the lippy. Nice catchlights in the eyes. Would prefer to see just a bit of chin - her face looks alarmingly incomplete without it. The lighting is pretty good overall - maybe just a tad more shadow would give it more definition. I think that it is just a little too much of a close-up to be flattering to her skin and that shine doesn't help. Shots like this are very demanding both for photographer and "stylist" - this falls just a little bit short on both counts - but a creditable effort.