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Earlier on I saw that it was really misty outside, so I decided to go and try to nab some shots. Was shooting away when I decided to see what the image would look like if I adjusted focus whilst exposing... So I had a bit of a play with that, and came up with this. Not very sure about it though, so I'm after some peoples opinions :)

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Hmm, not sure about it really. I look at it and see an experimental image with bags of mood, atmosphere and drama. It's oppressive and creative and shows willing to try something now.

But I also look at it and see a blurred, messy photo with nothing to interest me.

It's something new but it's not something I'm a fan of. Might be worth experimenting though, you usually seem to come up smelling of roses when you do!
 
Cheers, Glitch :)
I was trying to use the fence to lead the eye to the old tree - but I don't think that makes a strong enough composition for this to work well. I think there needs to be a very, very strong focal point... Then this might work, but as it is (after staring at it some more) I'm seeing more and more a blurred, messy photo with nothing to interest me.

I took some less zany shots... So I'll process one of those and see if this even works as a half decent shot when I'm not farting with the focus :)
 
I could have said 'well, it's okay' or just kept clear of the topic, but you've been good enough to comment on my work so I thought I'd offer an opinion.

It's a weird picture. It's certainly atmospheric and it looks like something taken on an old emulsion and stored in an attic somewhere; whether you were going for that feel I don't know, but that's certainly the first impression I got. It kind of looks like the type of shot you'd see in a photography textbook to illustrate the first B&W photography and it's the type of image that would probably be a cause for debate amongst arty types.

Technique wise, the shadow of the first fencepost on the left feels too strong for me and it almost stands out too much. As you rightly thought, the fence does lead the eye through the frame, but the tree looks grubby and almost looks as if you've put a thumb on the emulsion as it was being exposed - assuming we're still going with the B&W film photography thing here!

I wouldn't go so far as to say I hate it, but it's not something that I would associate with the general quality of your previous work I've seen. As an experiment it probably stands up, but only just, and if you can go somewhere with it then I take my hat off to you.
 
Would it maybe work better with a tighter crop? If you made it square, say, then the tree would sit a little closer to a thirds line; it's a little too near the edge of the frame for my taste, as is.
 
im not sure about this one.

i like it as long as i dont look to close, then the 'ghosting' of the fence post on the far left of the frame distracts too much. i think it might work better softly focused or not quite so exagerated.
 
it looks a bit like you moved the camera whilst you were changing the focus?? maybe if you tried it again but kept the camera dead still on a tripod it would look great. as was said before, they have bags of atmosphere and mood. needs improvement, but good. :)
 
guys, cheers for all the constructive critisicm, really appreciated :)

I'm gonna try a few things, see if it's any better ;)

@themask70 ~ it was on a Manfrotto 190 Pro w// 460MG, and the legs were well placed - the camera was not moving :o
 
I quite like it actually. Could maybe do with a bit of a clean up around the right hand side of the tree though, and for future reference, maybe a slightly more interesting background though don't over-do it.
 
I quite like the first one. I guess you just took it right out of focus whilst exposing the shot? Perhaps an improvement might be to not take it quite so far out of focus whilst exposing, so the blurry element isn't quite so pronounced, if you see what I mean? I think it's a technique that you should defiantly explore more, I think it could work really well with certain images, like this one.
 
Yeah, I took it waaaay OOF when exposing... Other people have said it may work better somewhere in the middle, and I think I have images that I didn't take quite so far. I'll check and report back :D
 
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