Portrait C+C Please!

DRZ

DRZ

DRZ

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300D, 50mm, F/1.8, 1/30th, ISO400, No Flash.

No border added because I dont know what border style to go for!

Just after comments and constructive criticism really :)

Thanks guys :)
 
DRZ said:
CRW_7367bw3s.jpg


300D, 50mm, F/1.8, 1/30th, ISO400, No Flash.

No border added because I dont know what border style to go for!

Just after comments and constructive criticism really

Thanks guys
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not bad fella :) perhaps a tidge more contrast? Maybe it's just me loving contrasty b&w :) Shame about the subject tho :(





Joke <3
 
Nice, I like it!
Two things bothering me :
I would perhaps crop a little from the left. You have this tight cropping thing going on across the top & bottom, which is great, but it feels odd with so much space to the left.
Also, the background to the right is distracting.
 
i did a similar thing to ghandi, cant direct paste as that pesky admin has the gallery hotlink protected to stop bandwidth thieves(slaps self)

http://www.tpfgallery.com/gallery2/d/14629-1/CRW_7367bw3sblur.jpg

not made it as bright as ghandis though, like the catchlight he added,
Matty off TP said:
i cropped it, used the lasso tool to get draw round the eye, made a new layer and used shadow/highlight tool to make it brighter, and sharpened it, opacity of the layer is around 50%, blended the edges of the join.
New layer, added a mask, used the radial fill tool on that layer and added a gauson blur (9%) to the layer, just to soften around the face and highlight the eye further. Pretty eyes, got to make the most of them. Perhaps a reflector to get a bit more light into the eye area?
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Itb looks good with a black border around it, blacka nd white photos ually do but no extra white lines that take away the eyes from the person in the border though :p

the 50mm is nice for portraits as you have shown!
 
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