I have to say i dont think they are that great at all. The first thing that comes to mind is that they are both extremely soft. The first probably from a wide-open aperture over a long distance, and the second maybe because it was such a long exposure (a bit of shake maybe?).
The first doesnt interest me at all. I see what the subject is supposed to be but it's not framed very well, the foreground is highly distracting and the colours arent quite right (including the sky being too bright).
The second is better, but the composition isn't particularly good again. You're not at enough of an angle to The Eye to make it seem purposeful, yet you're not dead straight onto it. The Eye is dead in the middle of the shot, but if you're doing this you really need to fill the frame more, not leave a lot of space around it. In my opinion.
Was The Eye spinning? If it was, i would have gone for a much longer exposure to show this.. as it stands it looks a bit like you've just snapped it at a short exposure.
I hope that's useful stuff