The Mumbles

PaulStat · 17 Apr 2007 at 18:32

I'm undecided whether this is complete, please give suggestions for improvement

gandhi · 17 Apr 2007 at 19:06

looks a bit dark and could possibly hold touch more sharpening, but I guess it depends on the image you have in your minds eye?

Johnny|lucidcomposure · 17 Apr 2007 at 20:14

Its not working for me. I would try a medium contrast black n white.

ChroniC · 17 Apr 2007 at 21:25

Just a mess about really, im sure something good can come out of it.

Amp34 · 17 Apr 2007 at 21:39

Not enough contrast in the foreground and the top left sky is really distracting, it looks juddery. I can't work out if it is what the sky looked like or if it is a processing issue.

Nice composition though.

PaulStat · 17 Apr 2007 at 22:29

I realise some of you aren't going to like this, but..... this is what I was aiming for originally anyway. Or thereabouts

PaulStat · 18 Apr 2007 at 09:12

Thank you for your opinions on my latest re-work

. Anyway here's something else I want your opinion on pleeeeaaaassssee. Which one and do they work?

PaulStat · 18 Apr 2007 at 09:40

Oh and here's a crop of my original shot