As per your other thread the chromatic aberration really stands out in these too.
What camera are you using? There's something that doesn't sit right with me in terms of processing. A lot look quite normal - if that makes sense - almost like estate agency photos.
I would personally try a shallower depth of field and with these I'd opt for a slightly desaturated look too, whereas it looks like you've upped it.
I like the model ones in terms of the idea but again a shallower depth of field would help. Not sure about the pen/veins on the legs though
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