What do you think?

[PC-M Vip3r]

So I have been making a site for a few weeks, but can't make my mind up on if it's any good or not.

Yes or No? C&C welcome...

 

[PC-M Vip3r]

I know the spelling mistakes are there, just something I filled in quickly after making the original design. I'll fill it in properly and it might look better then..

Edit: Reading through it some of the spelling is terrible.