Looks really good!
You might want to add a waste to energy plant with 0% funding to your industrial sector, so it collects the rubbish from your residential zone, making it more desirable.
Half way through your residential zone i would connect another avenue to allow the transport faster movement.
It looks like your industry is in the same region as your residential? If thats so i'd remove the industry completely from there and create another region next to your residential and start it there instead. This allows you to create lots of dirty industry without impacting on your residents.
You might want to add a waste to energy plant with 0% funding to your industrial sector, so it collects the rubbish from your residential zone, making it more desirable.
Half way through your residential zone i would connect another avenue to allow the transport faster movement.
It looks like your industry is in the same region as your residential? If thats so i'd remove the industry completely from there and create another region next to your residential and start it there instead. This allows you to create lots of dirty industry without impacting on your residents.