You can rip the **** out of me for this

'every moment of joy is more joyful' - change this joy>joyful combination it reads poorly!

Also, don't repeat love is definetly life's greatest gift at the end, you have already said it once, people don't need to hear that cheesy stuff twice, find something else.

'every moment of joy is more enjoyable'
 
WTF man, Mick was standing right next to me a moment ago, I turn around for a second tops and suddenly he's gone.

Anyone seen him? :confused:
 
WTF man, Mick was standing right next to me a moment ago, I turn around for a second tops and suddenly he's gone.

Anyone seen him? :confused:

I think you will find he is refered to as "the" mick not "mick", it makes him feel special.
 
To the Bride's mother, I have you to thank for raising such a beautiful, witty, caring and loving young woman. The woman with who I am now journeying with through life.

To the Bride's father, she takes it up the wrongun! Waheeeeeeeey!

*n
 
To the Bride's mother, I have you to thank for raising such a beautiful, witty, caring and loving young woman. The woman with who I am now journeying with through life.

To the Bride's father, she takes it up the wrongun! Waheeeeeeeey!

*n

her dad actually is dead
 
giving and receiving?? - sounds like joey's speech in friends.

It is a love based of giving and receiving as well as having and sharing. And the love that they give and have is shared and received. And through this having and giving and sharing and receiving, we too can share and love and have... and receive.

:p
 
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