'every moment of joy is more joyful' - change this joy>joyful combination it reads poorly!
Also, don't repeat love is definetly life's greatest gift at the end, you have already said it once, people don't need to hear that cheesy stuff twice, find something else.
WTF man, Mick was standing right next to me a moment ago, I turn around for a second tops and suddenly he's gone.
Anyone seen him?![]()
To the Bride's father, she takes it up the wrongun! Waheeeeeeeey!
To the Bride's mother, I have you to thank for raising such a beautiful, witty, caring and loving young woman. The woman with who I am now journeying with through life.
To the Bride's father, she takes it up the wrongun! Waheeeeeeeey!
*n
giving and receiving?? - sounds like joey's speech in friends.