Pretty Clever, if a little wet.

[iamdjdz]

Clever, I liked it.

 

[HeadlessChicken]

Tis very well done.

Sadly good intentions and campaigns will not change our ever destructive nature

 

[shifty_uk]

Very good. Have some stars.

 

[MiNxYyY]

Just rated it

 

[Nebzor]

Pretty clever? Yes.

Brilliant with true insight etc? No.

 

[deuse]

Just rated it

Same here but it did not show up

I am saving this out to show my kids.
they may learn something from it.

 

[Tom0]

Pretty clever? Yes.

Brilliant with true insight etc? No.

Also my opinion.

 

[ScarySquirrel]

Very cool

 

[Things change I've changed]

Clever piece of writing that, if anyone wants to look it over and see how it's constructed,

I realize this may be a shock but

"Happiness comes from within"

is a lie, and

"Money will make me happy"

So in 30 years I will tell my children

they are not the most important thing in my life.

My employer will know that

I have my priorities straight because

work

is more important than family

I tell you this

Once upon a time

Families stayed together

but this will not be true in my era

this is a quick fix society

Experts tell me

30 years from now I will be celebrating the 10th anniversary of my divorce

I do not concede that

I will live in a country of my own making

In the future

Environmental destruction will be the norm

No longer can it be said that

My peers and I care about this earth

It will be evident that

My generation is apathetic and lethargic

It is foolish to presume that

There is hope.

 

[uv]

that was rather awesome

I watched it muted, but still, it made me smile

 

[nikebee]

Clever piece of writing that, if anyone wants to look it over and see how it's constructed,

Yes but without the video that makes absolutely no sense

 

[PinkFloyd]

Clever stuff

 

[Chimerical]

That's really good actually. Suprised.

 

[BigglesPiP]

That's good, I didn't see it coming.

 

[knowlesy]

Great video to be honest.

Well executed.

 

[cheets64]

I cried.

 

[titaniumx3]

Clever, but sadly reading it down from the top is far more realistic.

 

[Crizzy]

Yes but without the video that makes absolutely no sense

I dunno I think it works quite well on its own:

I am part of a lost generation

I can change the world and refuse to believe that

I realize this may be a shock but

"Happiness comes from within"

is a lie, and

"Money will make me happy"

So in 30 years I will tell my children

they are not the most important thing in my life.

My employer will know that

I have my priorities straight because

work

is more important than

family

I tell you this

Once upon a time

Families stayed together

but this will not be true in my era

this is a quick fix society

Experts tell me

30 years from now I will be celebrating the 10th anniversary of my divorce

I do not concede that

I will live in a country of my own making

In the future

Environmental destruction will be the norm

No longer can it be said that

My peers and I care about this earth

It will be evident that

My generation is apathetic and lethargic

It is foolish to presume that

There is hope.



And all of this will come true unless we choose to *reverse it.*

 

[Dave85]

fantastic thanks for that

 

[GeForce]

Very, very clever