a few recents shots

[cyclopopcicle]

taken on my fuji S5700

C+C welcome

 

[Willis]

Hi here goes

1 Is out of focus as it looks like the camera has auto focused on the back leg.
2 Would be nice but to much vignette for me, nice capture apart from that.
3 Is a nice capture
4 Doesn't really do much for me and would maybe be better if the dogs face was in the shot.
5 Is to dark & maybe needs the contrast taken down a bit. Also not sure if the kids on the bikes are meant to be the main focal point all the gate and the long road along the lake.

Hope that helps

 

[cyclopopcicle]

Hi here goes

1 Is out of focus as it looks like the camera has auto focused on the back leg.
2 Would be nice but to much vignette for me, nice capture apart from that.
3 Is a nice capture
4 Doesn't really do much for me and would maybe be better if the dogs face was in the shot.
5 Is to dark & maybe needs the contrast taken down a bit. Also not sure if the kids on the bikes are meant to be the main focal point all the gate and the long road along the lake.

Hope that helps

thanks for the input
1. i noticed that also (but hoped no one would notice )
5. the main focal point was the path, i will try later to lighten it, as well as take out the vignette from 2

 

[Willis]

thanks for the input
1. i noticed that also (but hoped no one would notice )
5. the main focal point was the path, i will try later to lighten it, as well as take out the vignette from 2

I think 5 may work if in B&W with nothing else in the shot as it has a nice lead out line (the path)

 

[adeq1]

i think 2 would look better if you change the blur/vignette to a big pink heart