Grammatically improve this...

SideWinder · 13 Dec 2009 at 15:24

"Hi Chris,

I heard you're pretty good on FIFA 2010 playing as Aldershot!".

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Is that the best way i can phrase it? And lol at anyone "improving it" by swapping the team.

(It's a Xmas present thingy!).

Welshy · 13 Dec 2009 at 15:26

"Hi Chris,

I heard you're pretty good at playing as Aldershot on FIFA 2010!".

Personally, that sounds more correct.

Ziggy · 13 Dec 2009 at 15:30

sup kris

i heer u r pro @ fifa lolz, wiv dat team aldashoot

enjoy teh prezzie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

xx

Disco Boy · 13 Dec 2009 at 15:31

Welshy said:
"Hi Chris,

I heard you're pretty good at playing as Aldershot on FIFA 2010!".

Personally, that sounds more correct.

This.

SideWinder · 13 Dec 2009 at 15:33

Thanks.

samir_ansari · 13 Dec 2009 at 17:40

Ziggy said:
sup kris

i heer u r pro @ fifa lolz, wiv dat team aldashoot

enjoy teh prezzie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

xx

This

Macky · 13 Dec 2009 at 17:45

"Hi Chris,

I suck on Fifa 10 so please could you help me improve? Thanks."

Bleek · 13 Dec 2009 at 17:47

Hi Chris,

I raped a random stranger in Aldershot last night, I might have killed them but I can't be sure. It was dark.

x

Bleek · 13 Dec 2009 at 17:47

Bleek said:
Hi Chris,

I raped a random stranger in Aldershot last night, I might have killed them but I can't be sure. It was dark.

x

This.

icey_haj · 13 Dec 2009 at 17:47

Macky said:
"Hi Chris,

I suck on Fifa 10 so please could you help me improve? Thanks."

This.

loltim · 13 Dec 2009 at 17:51

Bleek · 13 Dec 2009 at 17:51

Tim said:
this

This!

Adrianr · 13 Dec 2009 at 17:52

Bleek said:
Hi Chris,

I raped a random stranger in Aldershot last night, I might have killed them but I can't be sure. It was dark.

x

Got a chuckle

Manics · 13 Dec 2009 at 17:59

"Hi Chris,

I heard you're pretty. Playing good, as on Aldershot.

FIFA 2010

SideWinder · 13 Dec 2009 at 18:00

I love OcUK sigh.

Yamahahahahaha · 13 Dec 2009 at 18:03

"Good day fine sir Christoph,

Hath mine ears not been deceived, one has verily informed myself that your sophistications in FIFA 2010 are most prominently found when playing Aldershot!"

Beerbaron · 13 Dec 2009 at 18:06

After tonights game you could change the team name to liverpool

danza · 13 Dec 2009 at 18:06

Tim said:
this

Bleek said:
This!

SideWinder said:
I love OcUK sigh.

This, this and this.

thecremeegg · 13 Dec 2009 at 18:07

Aldershot! Woo, my (ex)local team....I play as them in Fifa as well

Gaidin109 · 13 Dec 2009 at 18:07

Who the hell are Aldershot?