Yours sincerely
I look forward to your response,
Regards,
Mr Complainy Complainerson.
End it with a FFUUUUUUUU pic![]()
in this day an age who gives a toss, just say bye
Well, this is my most recent complaint: http://forums.overclockers.co.uk/showpost.php?p=15868357&postcount=13
Mind you I'm a bit more nicey-nicey instead of threatening action against them.
You have quite a lot of superfluous capitalisation and several spelling mistakes - and it might be worth making it more formal - 'father' instead of 'dad', for example.
As for the ending, 'yours faithfully' is the strictly correct way I imagine - but I prefer my friendly-yet-firm appeal to them, making it clear they'd lose a customer and would have bad opinion spread by my word of mouth.
lol at dogoid!
Your style of writing a complaints letter is different to mine, I would not make direct threats, however I would make it clear to them I am an opinion leader with all my work colleagues and friends and family and I would not hesitate to voice my poor experience with them.
Might be a nice addition![]()
Lucky girl getting your cash back very fortunate!
Sara having worked in customer service environments for along time I have to say that letter lost me at the start and I would have filed it in B1n myself , however the further I tread the better the letter got in fact towards the end I would say it was A1 standard. what response did you get ?
Blow me!