Well, one way I look at photos is to shut my eyes for 10 seconds and then slowly open them. I take note of what my eyes first see and the path my eyes take over the photo and how long I spend at different parts of the photo. With a good photo I will immediately be taken to an interesting part and there will often be some easy path to follow such as leading lines, a nice S-curve or simply a compositional balance which makes the viewer take in the whole image.
Another technique is to blur my eyes slightly to find the structure of the image. Doing this to your image brings the watermark as a main feature.
With a giant great watermark that is one of the first things I see and is one of the most prominent in your image.
Especially the way your subject (statue) takes up a small part and you have a large relatively blank area (which is good). this blank area should remain blank, otherwise it looks like water mark is some advertising piece, or an ad campain, a presentation slide. With your photos I half expect to see a list of credits for some 2nd world war movie. Instead there is an over sized water mark which looks very unprofessional.
I'm sorry, but I cannot enjoy the photo the way it is intended with that obvious water mark.