Japan's Forest of Death.

Robbie G said:
Translation: you don't want to open yourself up to similar criticism.
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No, it's a issue of relevance and genre. Do you actually know what theological exegesis is?

I suppose I could give him a link to my 15,000 word essay on the Arian Christological controversy and the Council of Nicaea in AD325, but I'm not sure how helpful it would be. I can also offer a detailed analysis of the Ignatian Epistles. What do you think?

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OK Forde, click here to download my essay. It's a completely different style in a completely different genre, so who knows what you'll get out of it. Good luck. :)
 
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Interesting article, always been intrigued by that forest.

some of those photos in the links to the sources in the article are extremely chilling.
 
Thanks for the link, I'll take a look soemtime. Shame there's nothing from Redrum? Anyway, as most people have been very kind I'll get started on another one.
 
Forde said:
Thanks for the link, I'll take a look soemtime. Shame there's nothing from Redrum? Anyway, as most people have been very kind I'll get started on another one.
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You're welcome.

Your article reflects sensitivity towards your subject, which is the first and most important thing to get right. The rest will come with practice.

:)
 
"Perfect place to die"

Cool, now I know where im going when im 90 years old and on my last legs :)

No hospital beds for me!
 
Forde said:
Shame there's nothing from Redrum?
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I'm afraid I don't have any written articles on the Internet. I don't really see why you specifically want articles from people that have offered you the constructive criticism you asked for. Reading articles from professional journalists and authors would be more beneficial to you than reading something I have written, or Evangelion's essay for that matter.

Google is your friend.
 
Redrum said:
I don't really see why you specifically want articles from people that have offered you the constructive criticism you asked for.
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I would have thought it was pretty obvious. If you're going to offer advice to someone, then that person can safely assume there's more to learn from you.
 
Well I am no journalist or author. I was just offering my casual opinion, but if you want to learn more from me and others, write some more and post a link here and I would be happy to offer my opinion again, especially as I enjoyed reading your first piece.

I teach very low level English for a living so it's enjoyable to have something more advanced to try to check.
 
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