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Cr0fty

Cr0fty

Cr0fty

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Here's a little poem I wrote in the more lucid moments of last night's sleep chasing... I would love to hear your thoughts :)

Immesaurably minded,
magnificently materialised.
Meticulous, magnificent...
Momentary.
Mere mortal matter,
making mountains move.
Masters make moments,
meaning motivates man.

Created creates creator,
champion of chance & change.
Consistently challenging...
Coaxing,
carrying craft, culture & creativity.

Contortion.

Curtiously considered,
credit to coach,
but
crafty creatures crawl &
crooks creep concealed...
Curiosity covers costs.
Communication consequently caves,
catalysed crumbling,

Chaos.

Cut corpses carrying cold cash,
cunning commandeers chivalry,
chastised.
Conspicuously, coyote careers,
confuses,
cold clouds cover casting crashing currents,
carnage.
Calamity of colossal conception.

Conviction.

Calmly collected cognitive consciousness
connected.
Certified?
Certainly.
Cinderella carries coal yet cast,
Civilisation curtails her cask...
Croft senses checkmate, calling
"Come, while it lasts!"

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This poem is about (in this order) - The majesty/chance of life, creativity and connectedness, or human potential. The room for error of humanity, wrongdoing, corruption. Our mortality & increasing interconnectedness.

Edit: I should add. Don't take it too seriously.
 
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Cr0fty said:
If you didn't understand it I can provide a breakdown ;)

Opinion taken on board. I'll maybe use a different letter next time. Perhaps H? Oh harrowing H.
Click to expand...

H could be more interesting - many more possibilities.

Harrowing Henry H'established His Hairdresser's in H'Esssex.
 
It's the type of thing you should be reading in a dimly lit café, standing on a miniscule stage wearing a beret while someone randomly slaps a tiny drum behind you.
 
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