Anything wrong with my ad?

- Needs better pictures, nothing worse than a wet car that is still dirty.
- No one cares how many MPG you can get, different driving styles can affect that. If people want to know, they can read the stats provided by AT.
- Description is all over the place, people won't care where you bought the car from. Need to organise the structure.
- It's a an 8 year old Astra, don't see the point of the zoomed in pictures of the imperfections. You're putting off a lot of people that way.

Just my 2p
 
The right hand side looks like it has scratches down it due to the fence supports (in pic 4) - I'd agree with the others, best bet would be some nice photos of it clean and dry on a sunny day in a nice location.
 
Initially I didn't have any pictures of the scuffs, hence why they come later in the list, somebody asked me to put them up (guy in the text).

I will take your comments on board and take some dry pictures, also will change the description and see how I get on.

Thank you!
 
It's been 6 days, there aren't that many people out there desperate to pick up a mk5 astra - make some.of the tweaks mentioned then just stay patient
 
Pictures look a bit wonky on my phone plus get rid of this lot

Well looked after example. See photos of documents attached., Great family car!, , Scuff on front bumper and wear on bonnet, other than that just general wear from use of an 8 year old vehicle, , Only selling to buy a grand scenic (more space with children), Priced to sell
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Just list the facts.
 
Do you think people would think I've wasted their time if I don't tell them about the damage though?
 
If people want a perfect brand new astra they'd better go to vauxhall. That's what I tell the victims sorry potential buyers anyway
 
There are greasy prints I've not been able to get off after 2 years of washing. Paint work on 4 doors most likely because they used to have stickers on advertising my business
 
Just take it to your friendly eastern European car wash who will polish it up for you. Especially if you're hardly likely to use all the gear again.
 
It's clearly a well cared for car, but it looks absolutely awful in those pictures. Take it to a local hand car wash, bring a decent camera or at least a modern phone, park it on a nice local road, and put those photos on the ad.
 
4 near new tyres could be a selling point depending on brand, showing care of the
car - would a closeup photo help.
The impact of specifying new clutch/pads/tyres in first line suggests hard life ?
since clutch was changed back in 2013 only mention that further down
 
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