c+c Please.

funkyphantom · 23 Jun 2007 at 22:00

Hi, please go easy on me as this is only the second time ive posted a pic up on here. Id like c+c on it please. Its missing something but i cant quite put my finger on it. Think its maybe the lack of cloud?
thanks for looking

Johnny|lucidcomposure · 23 Jun 2007 at 23:02

If you think its missing something. I think its missing a forground.

funkyphantom · 23 Jun 2007 at 23:36

ya, maybe ive cropped it too much, i have the waves lapping on the beach, put kinda puts the composition too central.

robertgilbert86 · 24 Jun 2007 at 00:08

I'd chop off the right hand quarter of it.

funkyphantom · 24 Jun 2007 at 09:10

robertgilbert86 said:
I'd chop off the right hand quarter of it.

does that look better?

Topcat · 24 Jun 2007 at 10:25

funkyphantom said:
does that look better?

Is the picture at the top now the edited version ?

If so think it would have been better to have a new picture in that reply and leave the original.. that way people can see the progression...

I'm having problems with the photo to be honest, it's difficult to find a focal point andmy eyes are drawn to many places inc the very bottom... I'll have to look again when I've woken up more I think...

funkyphantom · 24 Jun 2007 at 10:41

Topcat said:
Is the picture at the top now the edited version ?

If so think it would have been better to have a new picture in that reply and leave the original.. that way people can see the progression...

I'm having problems with the photo to be honest, it's difficult to find a focal point andmy eyes are drawn to many places inc the very bottom... I'll have to look again when I've woken up more I think...

Sorry about that, my mistake. Ya for some reason the wife loves the picture, she says it reminds her of the holidays, and says she wants it printed and framed. But i really dont think its that good, which is why ive posted it for C+C. I could post the original none cropped version if you like.

NorthstaNder · 24 Jun 2007 at 11:02

it'd look quite soft/blurred if it was printed out as it doesn't seem that sharp to me.

funkyphantom · 24 Jun 2007 at 11:15

NorthstaNder said:
it'd look quite soft/blurred if it was printed out as it doesn't seem that sharp to me.

ya think i lost some clarity when i resized it. heres a link to the original picture, although i think ive overdone the sharpening somewhat which has resulted in noise. Sorry to be such a 'noob' but im learning.
Feel free to edit it as you like if you think its worth it.

http://www.biggamidlandsection.com/DSC_74203.jpg