Can someone proof read this please :P

MikeTimbers · 4 Aug 2006 at 07:54

participatory

fanger · 4 Aug 2006 at 11:32

MikeTimbers said:
participatory

Ta.

PaulStat · 4 Aug 2006 at 11:41

meggy-vengeance said:
everythigns spelt wrong in my eyes, no i lie. i cannot even type. Hello strongbowwwww to the head

and who are you flashing your boobs to

chino · 4 Aug 2006 at 14:01

Mp4 said:
I have worked in Fresh Foods for the last 12 months; I have enjoyed and taken an active role in, since my move from checkout activities.

This sentence makes no sense, and it's the first one. I don't see why you aren't just using fanger's letter. It is much better than your attempt.

Oh, make sure you say 'increase your experience' and not 'enlarge your experience'. Other than that, fanger has done a very good job.